高中英语作文范文10篇李华

高中英语李华作文范文10篇

高中的孩子们在写给李华的一封信英语作文时，可以参考一些范文来写作。下面是我跟大家分享的给李华的信，欢迎大家来阅读学习~

给李华的一封信篇1

Dear Li Hua,

Glad to hear from you. How is everything going now? From your last letter, you said you were just home from a trip to Hawaii with your family. I am so happy for you to have such a great trip. From your description, I realize how a beautiful place Hawaii is. I hope I can travel there one day. I am a little stress now, because I am going to take my final exam for this term. I am confidence in English, Chinese and math, but I am afraid I can’t do well in chemistry. You know that I am always bad at chemistry. I am afraid I will screw the whole final exam. Oh, forget my trouble. Christmas day is ing. You must busy preparing for it. I wish you Merry Christmas in advance.

Yours,

Lee

亲爱的李华，

很高兴收到你的来信。一切都好吗?你上一封信中说你才刚跟你父母从夏威夷度假回来。我真的很开心你能有这个开心的一段旅途。从你跟我对夏威夷的描述来看，那真的是一个很美的地方。我希望有一天我也能到那里旅游。我最近有点点压力，因为我准备要考期末考试了。我对英语，语文还有数学很有信心，但是很担心化学。你知道的，我化学一直都不好。我很怕因为化学把这次期考给弄砸了。噢，别想我的烦恼了。圣诞节就要到了，你现在肯定是在忙着准备吧。提前祝你圣诞节快乐。

李

给李华的一封信篇2

Dear Li Ming,

How is everything doing nowadays, i havent seen your letters long time, and i miss you exceedingly. So our examination is over, mow i have a leisure time at home, and so busy doing everything .espicially today, lots of housework i need to do, but my homework havent finished, beside, i also should walk with my dog, water the flowers and do the shopping. Recently, my daddy bought me a puter, and in the everning, i need to the puter class for learning. with the knowledge, i have learned how to send a e-mail to friends already.

Your friend，

Wang Peng

给李华的一封信篇3

Dear Mr Wang,

I write to you telling you how we feel about your teaching in our class. All of us students think highly of your way of teaching, as you can always make your class lively and interesting. In addition, you are such a learned man that we can learn a lot from you and most important of all, you are patient with us. Frankly, you have built up our confidence in learning English well.

Some of us are still poor at English and need your help. We hope you will speak a little bit slowly so that we can understand you better. Besides, would you please spend more time with us, joining in our after-school activities so that we have more chances to practice our oral English?

I believe we can make great progress with your help.

Sincerely，

Li Hua

Dear Tom,

I'd read the letter from you in which you asked me the security of our school. The security is attached importance in our school, there're some mesures to keep students from been as, we are educated by many awareness of safety. The security guards are increased and require all person e in the school to register, and so on. All of these mesures make our school more safety effectively.

Yours Sincerely,

Lihua

假如你是李华，刚刚收到两年前参观过你市的英国笔友Mike的来信询问近来公共交通状况，请你简要介绍武汉市 *** 采取的四条措施，并且从中选取一条或两条，结合自己的经历，写一篇短文，告诉Mike 你的感受和想法。

1.降低公汽票价2.推行免费自行车租赁3.修建4条地铁4.增加出租车数量 注意：1.字数120左右，所给的开头语不计在内 2.参考词汇：bike rental自行车租赁 Dear Mike, You asked me about the present situation of the public transportation in Wuhan in the last letter. _________________________________________ Yours,Li hua Now, I will municate the action of the government and my opinion with you. Firstly, the price of the bus has been cut down, which is very important, I think. Encouraging people to take bus can solve the biggest problem----too much people. Another way is to develop the bike rental. As we know, car is much bigger than the bike obviously. Driving a car takes up much more place than cycling. So, developing the bike rental is an absolutely correct way to prove traffic circumstances. Besides, government also builds 4 subway lines under the central of the city and increases the number of the taxis. In my opinion, all the action above is useful. When the actions above are all finished, the city will be more perfect.假设你是李华，你的美国老师Miss Man要求你们明天下午去听一个美国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。

请你根据以下要点，写一封短信向Miss Man请假。内容要点：*表示歉意*理由：去机场接人*询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座 写作要求：1：只能使用五个句子表达全部内容2：文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 Dear Miss Man,I am sorry that I can not join the cathedra about American history tomorrow afternoon because I have to pick up a friend from airport. It is the first time that my friend e to our city so I will go to airport to pick him up so that he will not lose his way. And I wonder if any record of the cathedra can be available so I can listen to it later .Hope my leave can be proved ,thank you Dear Sir/ Madam， 假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现在正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。

请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信。内容应包括：个人情况：年龄、性别、学历 个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况。

承诺：提供最佳服务 注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 生词：申请- apply (v.), application (n.) 志愿者-volunteer My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. I'm an eighteen-year-old boy studying in Yiwu High School. The reason why I want to be one of the volunteers is that I want to make the foreigners know more about my hometown as well as improving my own ability. I'm good at English, so there is no doubt that I can talk with them fluently. What's more, I like doing sports as well. Above all, I'm easy-going and kind-hearted. I will try my best to help foreigners no matter what trouble they have. I am sure I will be an excellent guide to show the people around our city and make them enjoy the attractions. Given a chance, I will offer them my best service. I hope that I can make a contribution to the Winter Asian Games. An early reply will be appreciated. Yours, Li Hua 最近我们学校就课外英语学习的途径做了调查。假如你是李华，请根据调查结果给编辑写一封信，结果如下：百人之十上网学习英语 百人之十不利用课外时间学习英语 百人之三十收看电视节目或电台的英语节目 百分制五十借阅英语图书 Dear Editor,We all know in this enty-first century, English is and has always been a very important language worldwide. Now, our country looks more into the popularization of English. Do fellows in our school care a lot about this subject? We took surveys of the different ways of learning English outside the classroom on students in our school, and found out that ten percent use inter, ten percent do not bother to study this in the time other than in class, thirty percent learn by watching television's or listening to radio's English programs, and fifty percent read English books. We are happy to conclude that students of our school are taking English more , Li Hua 假定你是李华，正在和家人在新西兰旅游。

请根据以下要点，给你的美国笔友珍妮（Jenny）写一封电子邮件告知你的旅游情况：1.美景：原始森林、海滩2.活动：观光飞机，极限跳伞3.朋友：新西兰人很友好，结识了一些朋友 注意：词数100左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 参考词汇：原始森林 primeval forests 观光飞机 scenic flights 极限跳伞 sky diving 高手帮忙，不要机翻，分数还会追加！Dear Jenny:its' so nice to write you again, for these several days, my parents and i 。

Dear Robert,

are you recently?Thanks for your letter,and for caring about our would like to tell you about grobal economic crisis has had great influence on our mother has been laid off and my father's salary has cut down since the crisis occured at the end of father tried many times to find a part-time job but failed .Now my parents are worried about my tuition of next a student,I can do nothing .I am very you think that I should get a part-time job?Could you give me some advice?

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

高一第6期英语报纸作文是吧Dear Harry,How did you spend your summer holidays?I'd like to share my last trip with my holiday ,I visited the West Lake in Hangzhou .Bright flowers,green trees,lovely birds and ancient towers attracted lots of tourists from all over the enjoy its beauty,many of them biked around the the evening,the lake was more beautiful in the took a happy walk and went to a wonderful music am sure that you will fall in love with this place when you visit it,and I am very glad to be your ,Li Hua.（纯手打，复制必究）。

Dear marry, After reading your letter,I know that you worry about your life here at school. Don't worry,'s mon that when you to a new country,you will be faced with a lot of challenges like language should say,our students here are really nice and can ask your teachers for help when you meet with love their students,even those from abroad. In my opinion,you should learn to be brave and try to municate with your clas *** closer you stay with them,the more they will understand confidence will grow as you get to know them,and you'll certain find that you have many friends. have a good time in China! Yours,Li Hua。

Hello, Lihua ! I have heard about your trouble with puters. You are so addicted to it that it has affected your study . I think you should take immediate and effective measures to get rid of it so now I would like to give you some suggestions. First ,you should join in some interest teams ,such as sport club ,music club and so on ,which can help you turn your attention to them . Second you should go travelling with your friends ,in which case the outer beautiful scenery will make you fet puters. Finally you should spend more time with your clas *** ates ,talking with them or playing with them. I hope these suggestions can help you. I am looking forward to your change.

Yours.

Linda.

You have made so big progress in Chinese！【And what really surprised me is your perfect handwriting.】 评价：正确的句子，含义略单调修改：You really improve a lot in your Grammar【完成时！】， sentence structures and language applying. I'm sure you will make bigger progress in future.评价：时态不对，内容可以修改：【新段】 【However】 Your letter【also】 has some mistakes.评价：转折连词在哪里！这很关键，段与段，句子与句子之间一定得有联系.内容不能显得太突兀.修改：You wrote some Chinese characters in a wrong way.评价：怪怪的修改：You made a few mistakes. Some Chinese characters you used is not think (practicing writing them and reading Chinese books)【reading and writing】 are good ways to correct writing errors.评价：总体还行，有点罗嗦修改：Also, there are some sentences which are hard to understand.评价：语态错！被动修改：be understoodListening to Chinese broadcasting, and watching Chinese movies【also】 can help you experience authentic Chinese life. As for grammar, there is also some (grammar) mistakes.评价：啊哈哈哈中文有语法？修改：Grammar of Chinese language is not that difficult.评价：我承认修改：I think you'll soon correct them after paying efforts. 评价：不要老用think ,suppose consider什么的都可以的.句子很好修改：【新段】 I am attaching an English travel note to this email. Looking forward to your reply.评价：乱错，时态&没完成题目要求的作文内容修改：An english travel note is attached behind the letter, and what I need is your precious ment.总评：首先题目要求内容必须完成.内容还可以充实，连接词加强，过渡加强.用词可以再好些.。

必备高考英语作文范文有李华写邮件、写通知、李华回信、回通知。

一、假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1、到达时间。

2、合适的礼物。

3、餐桌礼仪。

注意：

1、词数100左右。

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【范文】

Dear Terry,

How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend's home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.

To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you'd better bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What's more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food.

Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.

Best wishes!

Yours,Li Hua

二、你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：

1、短片内容：学校的发展。

2、放映时间、地点。

3、欢迎对短片提出意见。

注意：

1、词数100左右。

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【范文】

Notice

In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.

To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting.

What's more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.

The Student Union June

三、假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：

1、学校的体育场馆。

2、主要的运动项目。

3、你喜欢的项目。

注意：

1、词数100左右。

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【范文】

Dear Peter,

I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.

To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity.

As for me, I'm intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.

All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.

Yours,Li Hua

四、假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：

1、口语能力。

2、相关经验。

3、应聘目的。

注意：

1、词数80左右。

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【范文】

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.

I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What's more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.

I'm particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.

Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.

Yours faithfully,Li Hua

五、假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：

1、表示欢迎；

2、推荐他上哪所大学。

3、建议他做哪些准备工作。

注意：

1、词数不少于50。

2、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,Li Hua

高中英语作文范文10篇李华

在日常学习、工作抑或是生活中，大家最不陌生的就是作文了吧，作文根据写作时限的不同可以分为限时作文和非限时作文。那要怎么写好作文呢？以下是我为大家收集的高三英语作文10篇，欢迎阅读，希望大家能够喜欢。

假如你是李华，你的父母最近计划生第二胎。给你校的外籍老师Lucy写信谈谈你的看法。

Dear Lucy,

How are you? I’m Li Hua, a student attending your class. I’m writing to share my thoughts on the possible changes that may happen in my family.

Recently, a policy has been put forward to allow couples to have a second child. Therefore, my parents have decided to take it into consideration. To be honest, I feel unsure about this puzzling situation. Undoubtedly, a new addition to our family will bring us happiness. Keeping a brother or sister company will also develop my sense of responsibility. However, what worries me is whether my parents will begin to ignore me. If so, I will be heart-broken. Would you mind sharing your opinions with me?

Best wishes!

Yours ,

Li Hua

I like Christmas, it is just like our Spring Festival.

Maybe the Spring Festival is much more important and interesting than Christmas, but I like Christmas Day better. Because we can spend time with our friends and classmates during Christmas. When it is snowy,

Christmas becomes much more lovely, just like in fairytales. I can imagine I am in a fairytale, the girl who sold the matches is my friend, the ugly duck becoming more and more beautiful and so on. What a beautiful place! So we can also call Christmas “Snowy Lovely Day.”

On Christmas Day, shops are red and green. There are so many Christmas cards, Christmas hats, Christmas dolls and many colourful things. So shops look very beautiful. We can give a card or a doll to our friends and say “Merry Christmas.” By the way, I think studying can also become much more interesting.

Christmas is coming, it also means a new year will come. Let’s study harder to welcome

我喜欢圣诞节,它就像我们的春节。

也许春节比圣诞节更重要和有趣的,但我更喜欢圣诞节。因为我们可以花时间与我们的朋友和同学在圣诞节。当它下雪的,

圣诞节变得更加可爱,就像在童话。我可以想象我在童话中,卖火柴的女孩是我的朋友,丑鸭越来越漂亮等等。一个美丽的地方!我们也可以叫圣诞“雪可爱的一天。”

在圣诞节这一天,商店是红色和绿色。有很多圣诞卡,圣诞帽、圣诞娃娃和许多五颜六色的东西。所以商店看起来很漂亮。我们可以给我们的朋友和一个卡或一个娃娃说“圣诞快乐。“顺便说一下,我觉得学习也可以变得更有趣。

圣诞节即将来临,这也意味着新的一年。让我们更加努力地学习,欢迎

now we’re facing with a choice. whether to rent the school dormitory or not depends on different persons.

obviously, the school dormitory is cheaper. and i think as a university student i can afford it. but as each coin has two sides, the equipment isn’t very ideal. if i live in the school dormitory, i cannot occupy the whole toilet. that must be a terrible problem for a gift. what’s more? i have to go to bed on time and get up on time net morning.

on the other hand, renting a flat near school may solve all these problems ecept for the epense. it’ll cost me 800 rmb a month, and the price is considerably high for a no salary university student. but it’s really attractive to live with few people and have my own space.

as mentioned above, i’ve made up my decision to live near school and rent a flat. though the price is high, maybe i can find another girl also finding somewhere to live. and we can rent it together. thus reducing our epenses.

Since Jan 1st, China has allowed a couple to have two children, leaving behind its previous policy that limited most Chinese couples to one child, which has aroused a heated debate among the public.

In my opinion, the two-child policy should be carried out. To begin with, the change is meant to promote the population structure and deal with the problem of an ageing society. More old people may result in shortage of labor force. The new policy will slow down this decrease in the working population and hopefully continue China’s economic growth. Meanwhile, it will also lead to more spending on the second child, thus contributing to economic growth. On the other hand, if a family has two children, they two can share the burden of taking care of their parents and thus the sense of happiness will be stronger.

All in all, the two-child policy is beneficial for both family and country in the long run.

We have recently held a class meeting to discuss the pressure upon everyone of us Senior Three students. At the meeting everyone expressed their own opinions on how to get relieved from pressure.

Pressure comes from all around: from the heavy load of learning, from the fierce competition, from teachers, and from parents. Pressure may affect our studies if there’s too much of it. However, if taken positively, a certain amount of pressure may help push us ahead.

Whenever I find there’s too much pressure, I choose to work out or listen to some light music, which seems to be quite effective. There are many approaches to getting oneself relieved when pressure accumulates. I strongly recommend that when you feel much too stressed, you stop whatever you are doing, get out into the open, take a deep breath, and start thinking of something positive.

I have been to the Hai Nan with my parents this summer. It is a beautiful place.

I enjoy the sunshine, the fresh air and the beach there.

Living in there, you can keep in touch with tourists from all over the country.

People there are quite hospitable and hardworking.

I would like to go there again.

When I'm free or in trouble, I always take out a book and read quietly. In no time, I've put my heart into it so that I'll forget all the troubles. It's in this way that I've formed the habit of reading in any time.

当我空闲的时候或在麻烦，我总是拿出一本书静静地看书。在任何时候，我把我的心让我忘记所有的烦恼。就这样我已经形成在任何时间阅读的.习惯。

Little boys as I was, I was interest in picture books and storybooks. I was struck by them. No sooner had I entered the middle school than I began to read novel, plays, and essays and so on. I found I could get much from them. Little by little I took great interest in literature and last term I won the first prize in the composition contest among middle-school students in Zhe Jiang.

当我还是小孩子时，我在图画书和故事书感兴趣。我很惊讶他们。我刚进入了中学，我开始读小说，戏剧，散文等。我发现我可以从他们身上得到很多。渐渐的我开始对文学感兴趣的最后一学期我在浙江省中学生作文竞赛中获得一等奖。

Reading “The Emperor's New Clothes”, I had to let out a burst of laughter over his fool. “The Little Match Girl” couldn't keep me from crying for her misery. “Robinson Crusoe” took me into a strange world full of danger. And I was also deeply impressed by Helen Keller's patience and perseverance… Besides these, books also tell me other thing -how to be a man and how to tell the difference between right and wrong. In a word, good books can make me know what I didn't before. So I think of a good book as my best friend.

阅读“皇帝的新衣”，我不得不把一阵笑声在他的傻瓜。《卖火柴的小女孩》不能不让我为她哭的痛苦。《鲁滨孙漂流记》把我带进了一个充满危险的陌生的世界。我也深深打动了海伦凯勒的耐心和毅力……除此之外，本书还告诉我其它的东西——如何成为一个男人，如何分辨对与错。总之，好的书籍可以让我知道什么我不在。所以我认为一个好的书是我最好的朋友。

I'll never forget this famous saying,“Good books are best friends who never turn their backs upon us.”

我永远不会忘记这句名言，“好书是最好的朋友，谁不背对我们。”

The Spring Festival

Spring Festival is the most important festival in China .Its to celebrate the lunar calendar s new year .In the evening before the Spring Festival ,families get together and have a big meal .In many places people like to set off firecrackers .Dumplings are the most traditional food .Children like the festival very much ,

because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes .They can also get some money from their parents. This money is given to children for good luck . People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good fortune .

The Spring Festival lasts about 15 days long .People visit relatives and friends with the words Have all your wishes . People enjoy the Spring Festival ,during this time they can have a good rest .

春节

春节是中国最重要的节日。它是为了庆祝农历的新年的。在除夕,各家都会聚在一起吃团年饭,许多地方的人们喜欢燃放鞭炮。饺子是最传统的食品。孩子们非常喜欢这个节日，因为他们可以吃美味的食物并穿新衣服。

他们也可以从他们的父母那儿得到一些钱。这笔钱是为孩子祈求好运的。人们将春联贴上墙壁以求好运。春节持续约15天。人民探亲访友互道恭喜.人们很喜欢春节，在此期间，他们可以好好休息。

How time flies， it is a year， this morning， the winter holiday will begin school。 I like past holidays， there will always be on the first day of the holiday started， make a plan for the feasible， purpose is in order to be able to make myself in the holiday， have a more happy and substantial， and can learn more knowledge outside， and after a joy。

I want to develop my interests and hobbies， I want to practice calligraphy， together with dad grow up can also write good word。 See the TV news report， understand the society。 I more exercise and keep healthy。

I want to insist on keeping a diary， composition。 Before， I write diary "dry"， mainly is the lack of observation； Later， I'm going to look at 30 minutes a day of extra—curricular， put some thoughts and recorded during winter vacation， and some meaningful person or thing written in the article。 See some excellent composition， learn other people's writing strengths。 To find on the Internet to write good articles， learn from somebody else's learning。 In addition， I have a brochure， called "diary of a small material"， at ordinary times is trivial to observe， record some wonderful things， writing an article that is a good material！ When the time comes to write something， then don't worry about "there's nothing to write"！

Visiting relatives and friends， do civilized manners， respect their elders， to the relatives and friends about their own learning， to their peers share their experiences in learning。

This is my winter vacation plan， I not only want to strengthen learning， also want to do more to help parents， do you think I do this winter holiday plan？

时间过得真快，转眼又是一年，今天上午，学校开始放寒假了。我与以往放假时一样，总会在假期开始的第一天，订一个切实可行的计划，目的是为了能够使自己在假期中，过得更加的充实和快乐，并能学习到更多的校外知识，欢欢喜喜喜过个年。

我要培养我的兴趣和爱好，我要跟爸爸一起练练书法，长大以后也能够写一手好字。多看电视里的新闻报道，了解社会。我还要多锻炼身体，保持身体健康。

我要坚持写日记、作文。以前，我写的日记“干干的”，主要就是缺少观察；以后，我打算每天看三十分钟的课外书，在寒假期间把一些所见所闻记录下来，并把有一些有意义的人或事写成文章。看一些优秀的作文，学习别人的写作长处。在网上查找写的好的文章，向人家学习学习。另外，我还要一个小册子，起名为“日记小材料”，平时发生一点小事都要留心观察，把一些精彩的东西记录下来，那可是写文章的好材料哟！到时候要写东西，那就不愁“没事可写”了！

走亲访友，做到文明礼貌，尊敬长辈，向亲戚朋友介绍自己的学习情况，向同龄人交流学习心得。

这就是我的寒假计划，我不但要加强学习，也要多帮爸妈做事，大家觉得我这个寒假计划怎么样？

I still remember that thing a few years later and feel afraid。 It happened on my way to play。 It was Sunday。 I would like to Maggie s home for a visit。 However， when I passed a river， I saw three children at my age playing in the river。 How happy they were！ At that time， I had a idea that I would like to ask Maggie to go swimming with me in the river。 Suddenly， something scare happened。 One the three chiledren slipped and the other two wanted to help him。 Unfortunately， all of them were struggling。 I was shock。 And then I rushed to the river bank immediately。 However， I saw nothing but the peaceful river。 I knew what happened。 I was frightened。 A few hours later I heard the death of them。 I was so frightened and sad that I have never go never any river since then。

多年后我仍然记得那件事，仍然感到害怕。它发生在我出去玩的路上。那是一个星期日。我想去玛吉家。然而，在我路过一条河的时候，我看到三个与我年纪相仿的孩子在河里玩。他们是多么的开心啊！在那个时候，我有一个想法，我要叫玛吉和我一起到河里游泳。突然，发生了一些恐怖的事情。其中一个孩子滑倒了，另外两个想去帮他。不幸的是他们三个都一起在水里挣扎。我呆住了。然后我立刻冲到河边。但是，除了平静的河面我什么都没看见。我知道发生了什么事。我吓坏了。几个小时后，我听到他们死亡的消息。我很害怕很伤心以至于从那以后我从来没有走近过任何河流。

高中的孩子们在写给李华的一封信英语作文时，可以参考一些范文来写作。下面是我跟大家分享的给李华的信，欢迎大家来阅读学习~

给李华的一封信篇1

Dear Li Hua,

Glad to hear from you. How is everything going now? From your last letter, you said you were just home from a trip to Hawaii with your family. I am so happy for you to have such a great trip. From your description, I realize how a beautiful place Hawaii is. I hope I can travel there one day. I am a little stress now, because I am going to take my final exam for this term. I am confidence in English, Chinese and math, but I am afraid I can’t do well in chemistry. You know that I am always bad at chemistry. I am afraid I will screw the whole final exam. Oh, forget my trouble. Christmas day is ing. You must busy preparing for it. I wish you Merry Christmas in advance.

Yours,

Lee

亲爱的李华，

很高兴收到你的来信。一切都好吗?你上一封信中说你才刚跟你父母从夏威夷度假回来。我真的很开心你能有这个开心的一段旅途。从你跟我对夏威夷的描述来看，那真的是一个很美的地方。我希望有一天我也能到那里旅游。我最近有点点压力，因为我准备要考期末考试了。我对英语，语文还有数学很有信心，但是很担心化学。你知道的，我化学一直都不好。我很怕因为化学把这次期考给弄砸了。噢，别想我的烦恼了。圣诞节就要到了，你现在肯定是在忙着准备吧。提前祝你圣诞节快乐。

李

给李华的一封信篇2

Dear Li Ming,

How is everything doing nowadays, i havent seen your letters long time, and i miss you exceedingly. So our examination is over, mow i have a leisure time at home, and so busy doing everything .espicially today, lots of housework i need to do, but my homework havent finished, beside, i also should walk with my dog, water the flowers and do the shopping. Recently, my daddy bought me a puter, and in the everning, i need to the puter class for learning. with the knowledge, i have learned how to send a e-mail to friends already.

Your friend，

Wang Peng

给李华的一封信篇3

Dear Mr Wang,

I write to you telling you how we feel about your teaching in our class. All of us students think highly of your way of teaching, as you can always make your class lively and interesting. In addition, you are such a learned man that we can learn a lot from you and most important of all, you are patient with us. Frankly, you have built up our confidence in learning English well.

Some of us are still poor at English and need your help. We hope you will speak a little bit slowly so that we can understand you better. Besides, would you please spend more time with us, joining in our after-school activities so that we have more chances to practice our oral English?

I believe we can make great progress with your help.

Sincerely，

Li Hua

必备高考英语作文范文有李华写邮件、写通知、李华回信、回通知。

一、假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1、到达时间。

2、合适的礼物。

3、餐桌礼仪。

注意：

1、词数100左右。

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【范文】

Dear Terry,

How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend's home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.

To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you'd better bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What's more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food.

Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.

Best wishes!

Yours,Li Hua

二、你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：

1、短片内容：学校的发展。

2、放映时间、地点。

3、欢迎对短片提出意见。

注意：

1、词数100左右。

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【范文】

Notice

In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.

To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting.

What's more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.

The Student Union June

三、假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：

1、学校的体育场馆。

2、主要的运动项目。

3、你喜欢的项目。

注意：

1、词数100左右。

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【范文】

Dear Peter,

I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.

To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity.

As for me, I'm intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.

All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.

Yours,Li Hua

四、假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：

1、口语能力。

2、相关经验。

3、应聘目的。

注意：

1、词数80左右。

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【范文】

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.

I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What's more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.

I'm particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.

Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.

Yours faithfully,Li Hua

五、假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：

1、表示欢迎；

2、推荐他上哪所大学。

3、建议他做哪些准备工作。

注意：

1、词数不少于50。

2、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,Li Hua

英语作文范文10篇李华

写作思路：做到条理清楚、自然、明白，不杂乱，要倾注自己的思想感情，或探索人生真谛，或谈论思想问题、治学精神，使读者受到启迪和教育。这样的文章有了哲理，给予读者的感受也就更加丰富了。

正文内容：

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm glad to learn that you want a few part-time English reporters. I'm quite interested in think I'm fit for the job. As a student, I've read a lot and have much knowledge in many fields. I'm fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing. Besides, I'm easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others.

Above all, I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station. So I'm sure I can do the job well if I get the position.

I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully, Li Hua

译文：

亲爱的先生或女士：，

我很高兴得知你们需要一些兼职英语记者。我对它很感兴趣。

我认为我适合这份工作。作为一名学生，我读了很多书，在很多领域都有很多知识。我喜欢英语，口语和写作都很好。此外，我很容易相处，喜欢和别人一起工作。

最重要的是，我曾经在学校广播电台当过记者。所以我相信如果我得到这个职位，我能做好这项工作。

我期待着你的答复。

你忠实的，李华

高中的孩子们在写给李华的一封信英语作文时，可以参考一些范文来写作。下面是我跟大家分享的给李华的信，欢迎大家来阅读学习~

给李华的一封信篇1

Dear Li Hua,

Glad to hear from you. How is everything going now? From your last letter, you said you were just home from a trip to Hawaii with your family. I am so happy for you to have such a great trip. From your description, I realize how a beautiful place Hawaii is. I hope I can travel there one day. I am a little stress now, because I am going to take my final exam for this term. I am confidence in English, Chinese and math, but I am afraid I can’t do well in chemistry. You know that I am always bad at chemistry. I am afraid I will screw the whole final exam. Oh, forget my trouble. Christmas day is ing. You must busy preparing for it. I wish you Merry Christmas in advance.

Yours,

Lee

亲爱的李华，

很高兴收到你的来信。一切都好吗?你上一封信中说你才刚跟你父母从夏威夷度假回来。我真的很开心你能有这个开心的一段旅途。从你跟我对夏威夷的描述来看，那真的是一个很美的地方。我希望有一天我也能到那里旅游。我最近有点点压力，因为我准备要考期末考试了。我对英语，语文还有数学很有信心，但是很担心化学。你知道的，我化学一直都不好。我很怕因为化学把这次期考给弄砸了。噢，别想我的烦恼了。圣诞节就要到了，你现在肯定是在忙着准备吧。提前祝你圣诞节快乐。

李

给李华的一封信篇2

Dear Li Ming,

How is everything doing nowadays, i havent seen your letters long time, and i miss you exceedingly. So our examination is over, mow i have a leisure time at home, and so busy doing everything .espicially today, lots of housework i need to do, but my homework havent finished, beside, i also should walk with my dog, water the flowers and do the shopping. Recently, my daddy bought me a puter, and in the everning, i need to the puter class for learning. with the knowledge, i have learned how to send a e-mail to friends already.

Your friend，

Wang Peng

给李华的一封信篇3

Dear Mr Wang,

I write to you telling you how we feel about your teaching in our class. All of us students think highly of your way of teaching, as you can always make your class lively and interesting. In addition, you are such a learned man that we can learn a lot from you and most important of all, you are patient with us. Frankly, you have built up our confidence in learning English well.

Some of us are still poor at English and need your help. We hope you will speak a little bit slowly so that we can understand you better. Besides, would you please spend more time with us, joining in our after-school activities so that we have more chances to practice our oral English?

I believe we can make great progress with your help.

Sincerely，

Li Hua

Dear Tom,

I'd read the letter from you in which you asked me the security of our school. The security is attached importance in our school, there're some mesures to keep students from been as, we are educated by many awareness of safety. The security guards are increased and require all person e in the school to register, and so on. All of these mesures make our school more safety effectively.

Yours Sincerely,

Lihua

假如你是李华，刚刚收到两年前参观过你市的英国笔友Mike的来信询问近来公共交通状况，请你简要介绍武汉市 *** 采取的四条措施，并且从中选取一条或两条，结合自己的经历，写一篇短文，告诉Mike 你的感受和想法。

1.降低公汽票价2.推行免费自行车租赁3.修建4条地铁4.增加出租车数量 注意：1.字数120左右，所给的开头语不计在内 2.参考词汇：bike rental自行车租赁 Dear Mike, You asked me about the present situation of the public transportation in Wuhan in the last letter. _________________________________________ Yours,Li hua Now, I will municate the action of the government and my opinion with you. Firstly, the price of the bus has been cut down, which is very important, I think. Encouraging people to take bus can solve the biggest problem----too much people. Another way is to develop the bike rental. As we know, car is much bigger than the bike obviously. Driving a car takes up much more place than cycling. So, developing the bike rental is an absolutely correct way to prove traffic circumstances. Besides, government also builds 4 subway lines under the central of the city and increases the number of the taxis. In my opinion, all the action above is useful. When the actions above are all finished, the city will be more perfect.假设你是李华，你的美国老师Miss Man要求你们明天下午去听一个美国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。

请你根据以下要点，写一封短信向Miss Man请假。内容要点：*表示歉意*理由：去机场接人*询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座 写作要求：1：只能使用五个句子表达全部内容2：文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 Dear Miss Man,I am sorry that I can not join the cathedra about American history tomorrow afternoon because I have to pick up a friend from airport. It is the first time that my friend e to our city so I will go to airport to pick him up so that he will not lose his way. And I wonder if any record of the cathedra can be available so I can listen to it later .Hope my leave can be proved ,thank you Dear Sir/ Madam， 假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现在正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。

请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信。内容应包括：个人情况：年龄、性别、学历 个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况。

承诺：提供最佳服务 注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 生词：申请- apply (v.), application (n.) 志愿者-volunteer My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. I'm an eighteen-year-old boy studying in Yiwu High School. The reason why I want to be one of the volunteers is that I want to make the foreigners know more about my hometown as well as improving my own ability. I'm good at English, so there is no doubt that I can talk with them fluently. What's more, I like doing sports as well. Above all, I'm easy-going and kind-hearted. I will try my best to help foreigners no matter what trouble they have. I am sure I will be an excellent guide to show the people around our city and make them enjoy the attractions. Given a chance, I will offer them my best service. I hope that I can make a contribution to the Winter Asian Games. An early reply will be appreciated. Yours, Li Hua 最近我们学校就课外英语学习的途径做了调查。假如你是李华，请根据调查结果给编辑写一封信，结果如下：百人之十上网学习英语 百人之十不利用课外时间学习英语 百人之三十收看电视节目或电台的英语节目 百分制五十借阅英语图书 Dear Editor,We all know in this enty-first century, English is and has always been a very important language worldwide. Now, our country looks more into the popularization of English. Do fellows in our school care a lot about this subject? We took surveys of the different ways of learning English outside the classroom on students in our school, and found out that ten percent use inter, ten percent do not bother to study this in the time other than in class, thirty percent learn by watching television's or listening to radio's English programs, and fifty percent read English books. We are happy to conclude that students of our school are taking English more , Li Hua 假定你是李华，正在和家人在新西兰旅游。

请根据以下要点，给你的美国笔友珍妮（Jenny）写一封电子邮件告知你的旅游情况：1.美景：原始森林、海滩2.活动：观光飞机，极限跳伞3.朋友：新西兰人很友好，结识了一些朋友 注意：词数100左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 参考词汇：原始森林 primeval forests 观光飞机 scenic flights 极限跳伞 sky diving 高手帮忙，不要机翻，分数还会追加！Dear Jenny:its' so nice to write you again, for these several days, my parents and i 。

Dear Robert,

are you recently?Thanks for your letter,and for caring about our would like to tell you about grobal economic crisis has had great influence on our mother has been laid off and my father's salary has cut down since the crisis occured at the end of father tried many times to find a part-time job but failed .Now my parents are worried about my tuition of next a student,I can do nothing .I am very you think that I should get a part-time job?Could you give me some advice?

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

高一第6期英语报纸作文是吧Dear Harry,How did you spend your summer holidays?I'd like to share my last trip with my holiday ,I visited the West Lake in Hangzhou .Bright flowers,green trees,lovely birds and ancient towers attracted lots of tourists from all over the enjoy its beauty,many of them biked around the the evening,the lake was more beautiful in the took a happy walk and went to a wonderful music am sure that you will fall in love with this place when you visit it,and I am very glad to be your ,Li Hua.（纯手打，复制必究）。

Dear marry, After reading your letter,I know that you worry about your life here at school. Don't worry,'s mon that when you to a new country,you will be faced with a lot of challenges like language should say,our students here are really nice and can ask your teachers for help when you meet with love their students,even those from abroad. In my opinion,you should learn to be brave and try to municate with your clas *** closer you stay with them,the more they will understand confidence will grow as you get to know them,and you'll certain find that you have many friends. have a good time in China! Yours,Li Hua。

Hello, Lihua ! I have heard about your trouble with puters. You are so addicted to it that it has affected your study . I think you should take immediate and effective measures to get rid of it so now I would like to give you some suggestions. First ,you should join in some interest teams ,such as sport club ,music club and so on ,which can help you turn your attention to them . Second you should go travelling with your friends ,in which case the outer beautiful scenery will make you fet puters. Finally you should spend more time with your clas *** ates ,talking with them or playing with them. I hope these suggestions can help you. I am looking forward to your change.

Yours.

Linda.

You have made so big progress in Chinese！【And what really surprised me is your perfect handwriting.】 评价：正确的句子，含义略单调修改：You really improve a lot in your Grammar【完成时！】， sentence structures and language applying. I'm sure you will make bigger progress in future.评价：时态不对，内容可以修改：【新段】 【However】 Your letter【also】 has some mistakes.评价：转折连词在哪里！这很关键，段与段，句子与句子之间一定得有联系.内容不能显得太突兀.修改：You wrote some Chinese characters in a wrong way.评价：怪怪的修改：You made a few mistakes. Some Chinese characters you used is not think (practicing writing them and reading Chinese books)【reading and writing】 are good ways to correct writing errors.评价：总体还行，有点罗嗦修改：Also, there are some sentences which are hard to understand.评价：语态错！被动修改：be understoodListening to Chinese broadcasting, and watching Chinese movies【also】 can help you experience authentic Chinese life. As for grammar, there is also some (grammar) mistakes.评价：啊哈哈哈中文有语法？修改：Grammar of Chinese language is not that difficult.评价：我承认修改：I think you'll soon correct them after paying efforts. 评价：不要老用think ,suppose consider什么的都可以的.句子很好修改：【新段】 I am attaching an English travel note to this email. Looking forward to your reply.评价：乱错，时态&没完成题目要求的作文内容修改：An english travel note is attached behind the letter, and what I need is your precious ment.总评：首先题目要求内容必须完成.内容还可以充实，连接词加强，过渡加强.用词可以再好些.。

假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Mr Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)

八年级英语作文范文李华10篇

Dear Tom,

I'd read the letter from you in which you asked me the security of our school. The security is attached importance in our school, there're some mesures to keep students from been as, we are educated by many awareness of safety. The security guards are increased and require all person e in the school to register, and so on. All of these mesures make our school more safety effectively.

Yours Sincerely,

Lihua

假如你是李华，刚刚收到两年前参观过你市的英国笔友Mike的来信询问近来公共交通状况，请你简要介绍武汉市 *** 采取的四条措施，并且从中选取一条或两条，结合自己的经历，写一篇短文，告诉Mike 你的感受和想法。

1.降低公汽票价2.推行免费自行车租赁3.修建4条地铁4.增加出租车数量 注意：1.字数120左右，所给的开头语不计在内 2.参考词汇：bike rental自行车租赁 Dear Mike, You asked me about the present situation of the public transportation in Wuhan in the last letter. _________________________________________ Yours,Li hua Now, I will municate the action of the government and my opinion with you. Firstly, the price of the bus has been cut down, which is very important, I think. Encouraging people to take bus can solve the biggest problem----too much people. Another way is to develop the bike rental. As we know, car is much bigger than the bike obviously. Driving a car takes up much more place than cycling. So, developing the bike rental is an absolutely correct way to prove traffic circumstances. Besides, government also builds 4 subway lines under the central of the city and increases the number of the taxis. In my opinion, all the action above is useful. When the actions above are all finished, the city will be more perfect.假设你是李华，你的美国老师Miss Man要求你们明天下午去听一个美国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。

请你根据以下要点，写一封短信向Miss Man请假。内容要点：*表示歉意*理由：去机场接人*询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座 写作要求：1：只能使用五个句子表达全部内容2：文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 Dear Miss Man,I am sorry that I can not join the cathedra about American history tomorrow afternoon because I have to pick up a friend from airport. It is the first time that my friend e to our city so I will go to airport to pick him up so that he will not lose his way. And I wonder if any record of the cathedra can be available so I can listen to it later .Hope my leave can be proved ,thank you Dear Sir/ Madam， 假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现在正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。

请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信。内容应包括：个人情况：年龄、性别、学历 个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况。

承诺：提供最佳服务 注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 生词：申请- apply (v.), application (n.) 志愿者-volunteer My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. I'm an eighteen-year-old boy studying in Yiwu High School. The reason why I want to be one of the volunteers is that I want to make the foreigners know more about my hometown as well as improving my own ability. I'm good at English, so there is no doubt that I can talk with them fluently. What's more, I like doing sports as well. Above all, I'm easy-going and kind-hearted. I will try my best to help foreigners no matter what trouble they have. I am sure I will be an excellent guide to show the people around our city and make them enjoy the attractions. Given a chance, I will offer them my best service. I hope that I can make a contribution to the Winter Asian Games. An early reply will be appreciated. Yours, Li Hua 最近我们学校就课外英语学习的途径做了调查。假如你是李华，请根据调查结果给编辑写一封信，结果如下：百人之十上网学习英语 百人之十不利用课外时间学习英语 百人之三十收看电视节目或电台的英语节目 百分制五十借阅英语图书 Dear Editor,We all know in this enty-first century, English is and has always been a very important language worldwide. Now, our country looks more into the popularization of English. Do fellows in our school care a lot about this subject? We took surveys of the different ways of learning English outside the classroom on students in our school, and found out that ten percent use inter, ten percent do not bother to study this in the time other than in class, thirty percent learn by watching television's or listening to radio's English programs, and fifty percent read English books. We are happy to conclude that students of our school are taking English more , Li Hua 假定你是李华，正在和家人在新西兰旅游。

请根据以下要点，给你的美国笔友珍妮（Jenny）写一封电子邮件告知你的旅游情况：1.美景：原始森林、海滩2.活动：观光飞机，极限跳伞3.朋友：新西兰人很友好，结识了一些朋友 注意：词数100左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 参考词汇：原始森林 primeval forests 观光飞机 scenic flights 极限跳伞 sky diving 高手帮忙，不要机翻，分数还会追加！Dear Jenny:its' so nice to write you again, for these several days, my parents and i 。

Dear Robert,

are you recently?Thanks for your letter,and for caring about our would like to tell you about grobal economic crisis has had great influence on our mother has been laid off and my father's salary has cut down since the crisis occured at the end of father tried many times to find a part-time job but failed .Now my parents are worried about my tuition of next a student,I can do nothing .I am very you think that I should get a part-time job?Could you give me some advice?

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

高一第6期英语报纸作文是吧Dear Harry,How did you spend your summer holidays?I'd like to share my last trip with my holiday ,I visited the West Lake in Hangzhou .Bright flowers,green trees,lovely birds and ancient towers attracted lots of tourists from all over the enjoy its beauty,many of them biked around the the evening,the lake was more beautiful in the took a happy walk and went to a wonderful music am sure that you will fall in love with this place when you visit it,and I am very glad to be your ,Li Hua.（纯手打，复制必究）。

Dear marry, After reading your letter,I know that you worry about your life here at school. Don't worry,'s mon that when you to a new country,you will be faced with a lot of challenges like language should say,our students here are really nice and can ask your teachers for help when you meet with love their students,even those from abroad. In my opinion,you should learn to be brave and try to municate with your clas *** closer you stay with them,the more they will understand confidence will grow as you get to know them,and you'll certain find that you have many friends. have a good time in China! Yours,Li Hua。

Hello, Lihua ! I have heard about your trouble with puters. You are so addicted to it that it has affected your study . I think you should take immediate and effective measures to get rid of it so now I would like to give you some suggestions. First ,you should join in some interest teams ,such as sport club ,music club and so on ,which can help you turn your attention to them . Second you should go travelling with your friends ,in which case the outer beautiful scenery will make you fet puters. Finally you should spend more time with your clas *** ates ,talking with them or playing with them. I hope these suggestions can help you. I am looking forward to your change.

Yours.

Linda.

You have made so big progress in Chinese！【And what really surprised me is your perfect handwriting.】 评价：正确的句子，含义略单调修改：You really improve a lot in your Grammar【完成时！】， sentence structures and language applying. I'm sure you will make bigger progress in future.评价：时态不对，内容可以修改：【新段】 【However】 Your letter【also】 has some mistakes.评价：转折连词在哪里！这很关键，段与段，句子与句子之间一定得有联系.内容不能显得太突兀.修改：You wrote some Chinese characters in a wrong way.评价：怪怪的修改：You made a few mistakes. Some Chinese characters you used is not think (practicing writing them and reading Chinese books)【reading and writing】 are good ways to correct writing errors.评价：总体还行，有点罗嗦修改：Also, there are some sentences which are hard to understand.评价：语态错！被动修改：be understoodListening to Chinese broadcasting, and watching Chinese movies【also】 can help you experience authentic Chinese life. As for grammar, there is also some (grammar) mistakes.评价：啊哈哈哈中文有语法？修改：Grammar of Chinese language is not that difficult.评价：我承认修改：I think you'll soon correct them after paying efforts. 评价：不要老用think ,suppose consider什么的都可以的.句子很好修改：【新段】 I am attaching an English travel note to this email. Looking forward to your reply.评价：乱错，时态&没完成题目要求的作文内容修改：An english travel note is attached behind the letter, and what I need is your precious ment.总评：首先题目要求内容必须完成.内容还可以充实，连接词加强，过渡加强.用词可以再好些.。

在平平淡淡的日常中，大家都写过作文吧，作文要求篇章结构完整，一定要避免无结尾作文的出现。那么你知道一篇好的作文该怎么写吗？以下是我为大家收集的初二英语作文，欢迎阅读与收藏。

I have a good friend, her name is Li Hua. We met each other when I came to middle school. We are not in the same class, but we join the basketball club, as we have the same interest, we become good friends soon. Li Hua knows me well, I like to talk to her, because she is a good listener. When I complain, she will listen to what I say and then console me. Every time when I talk to her, I feel much better and forget about my annoyance. A good listen works so much, Li Hua is like the angel and brings me the sunshine.

我有一个好朋友,她的名字叫李华。当我上中学的时候我们就认识了。我们不在同一个班,但是我们加入篮球俱乐部,因为我们有着相同的兴趣,很快成为好朋友。李华非常了解我,我喜欢跟她说话,因为她是一个好的聆听者。当我抱怨时,她会听我说,然后安慰我。每次我跟她说话时,我感觉好多了,忘记我的烦恼。一个好的聆听者很有用,李华就像天使,给我带来了阳光。

As a middle school student, I learn many subjects, I study so hard every day. When I get home, I will do my homework and then go over the book. But when holiday comes, I feel a little confused, because I don’t want to study and do something new. Then I don’t know what to do, my mind get blank. I decide to develop my interest. Some day, I happened to see a tennis match and I couldn’t stop watching, then I fell in love with tennis. So I started to learn playing tennis, I felt so happy. Now tennis is my favorite sport, I find a way to relax myself.

作为一个中学生,我学许多科目,我每天那么努力学习。当我回家时,我会做作业,然后复习书本。但当假期来临的时候,我感到有点困惑,因为我不想学习，想做一些新的事情。我就不知道要做什么,我的头脑一片空白。我决定培养我的兴趣。有一天,我碰巧看到一场网球比赛,我无法停止下来看,然后我爱上了网球。因此我开始学习打网球,我感到很高兴。现在网球是我最喜欢的运动,我找到一个方法来放松自己。

Hello, everyone. I can tell you about me! I am a happy girl. My name is Nina, I am 12 years old this year. My hobbies are

singing and dancing. I usually play basketball on Saturday. I want to grow up to be a doctor .I didn’t like playing

video games, but I like reading some books .I ride bike to school .I go to school from Monday to Friday. I am a good

student in my school .Because I so like study .I am good kid too, Do you know? I usually do homework, help my family. My

cook food is tasty .I like cat my favorite season is fall. I like warm and sunny. I so like red. This is me! What about

you?

大家好。我可以告诉你关于我的！我是一个快乐的女孩。我叫妮娜，今年12岁。我的'爱好是唱歌和跳舞。我通常在星期六打篮球。我想长大后成为一名医生，我不喜欢玩电子游戏，但我喜欢读一些书，我骑自行车上学，我从星期一到星期五上学。我是一个好学生，因为我很喜欢学习，我也是一个好孩子，你知道吗？我通常做家庭作业，帮助我的家庭。我的烹调食物很好吃，我喜欢猫，我比较喜欢的季节是秋天。我喜欢温暖和阳光。我很喜欢红色。这是我！你呢？

Life needs positive energy. A person’s life is a road with lots of difficulties and various negative emotions. Everyone will have the desperate time. Positive energy can help us go through this period of time. For example, I am sad about the exam yesterday. But an optimistic classmate encourages me to think in a good way and comfort me. I can recover soon. But if she also is as pessimistic as me, I won’t have recovered so quickly. Maybe I will be sad for a long time. There are many similar things happening in our life. To live a better life, we need positive energy.

人的一生是充满困难和各种负面情绪的道路。每个人都有郁闷的时候。正能量可以帮助我们度过这段时期。例如，我为昨天考试的事而难过。但是一个乐观的同学鼓励我往好的方面想，安慰我。我可以很快地恢复过来。但是如果她也跟我一样悲观的话，我不可能这么快恢复心情的。也许我会伤心很久。在我们的生活中有很多这种类似的事情。为了生活得更美好，我们需要正能量。

Since I go to school, the teachers gave us the class in the classroom, it seemed that sitting in the chair and looking at the blackboard are the only way to receive the knowledge. But my new Chinese teacher has showed me another way to learn knowledge. Last week, my Chinese teacher had asked us to write an article about protecting the environment, when she asked us how much we knew about the pollution, we shaked our heads. Then she told us to have the class in the reading room, we could some reading there and searched the information. It was so excited for us to do it, we like this special class and it is very helpful.

自从我上学起,老师就在课堂上给我们上课,似乎坐在椅子上，看着黑板是获得知识的唯一途径。但是我的新语文老师给我展示了另一种方式去学习知识。上周,我的语文老师要求我们写一篇关于保护环境的文章,当她问我们我们对污染了解多少,我们摇了摇头。然后她告诉我们在阅览室上课,我们可以阅读和搜索信息。我们很兴奋,喜欢这种特别的课程，有助于我们学习。

假如你是李华，你在美国交换学习时的同学JACK，因患甲流住进了医院，心情紧张。你从他父亲的电话中获知此事决定写一封慰问信。主要内容包括

1得知的情况 2表示鼓励 3防甲流建议。写一篇英语作文。

Dear Jack,

I am sorry to hear in the phone call with your father that you were in hospital for you got the A H1N1 virus which made me feel so don't know how you got it,however,don't be so scared for the A H1N1 virus is medicable duo to the high just need to be clam and partner the treatment with the want to give some advice about how to prevent the A H1N1 mustn't go to the places full of people to reduce the probability of getting should wash your hand before the meals and after you go home from do this can you precent yourself from getting it again.

I am looking forward to hearing from you and wish you recover.

Yours

Lihua

My name is Li Hua. Last Sunday i had gone picnic with 3 of my friends at the beach at west coast park. We met at 9pm at the xx bus interchange and took bus no 100 to the park. It was a great day and we really had much fun. Despite the scorching hot sun, we played beach volleyball and rugby on the sandy beach, which we really enjoyed and helped to bond us closer. We also rode bicycle along the coast, while watching the sun set. it was truly me *** erizing. As for lunch, we each bought some food and drinks and shared with each other. I enjoyed the outing and had a really sweet dream that night.

Yours,in which case the outer beautiful scenery will make you fet puters. Finally you should spend more time with your clas *** ates ,talking with them or playing with them,such as sport club . First ,you should join in some interest teams . I hope these suggestions can help you. I am looking forward to your change. Second you should go travelling with your friends ,music club and so on ,which can help you turn your attention to them Hello, Lihua ! I have heard about your trouble with puters. You are so addicted to it that it has affected your study . I think you should take immediate and effective measures to get rid of it so now I would like to give you some suggestions

假如你是李华，你在美国交换学习时的同学JACK，因患甲流住进了医院，心情紧张。

你从他父亲的电话中获知此事决定写一封慰问信。

主要内容包括1得知的情况 2表示鼓励 3防甲流建议。

写一篇英语作文。

Dear Jack, I am sorry to hear in the phone call with your father that you were in hospital for you got the A H1N1 virus which made me feel so don't know how you got it,however,don't be so scared for the A H1N1 virus is medicable duo to the high just need to be clam and partner the treatment with the want to give some advice about how to prevent the A H1N1 mustn't go to the places full of people to reduce the probability of getting should wash your hand before the meals and after you go home from do this can you precent yourself from getting it again. I am looking forward to hearing from you and wish you ...

Dear Paul, I am glad to hear from you!You said you are always nervous when there is an me give you some advice:-1)Always do the subject revision early. It is even better, if you plan a daily revision for the whole year2)Keep yourself relax. Do not over pressure yourself3) Sleep well the night before the examination, Eat well for the breakfast on that day of examination4) Before the examination, run through some pass years papers and do some ) During the examination, if you have time left after you have pleted the questions, always check your answersI hope my above five pointers will help you to do better in examinationSuncerely,Li Hua

Dear Jane, Congratulations to your successfully passing the exam,and I am proud of your great progress on your addtion,I want to thank you for you are always ready to help us with our English,without your help,our English level won't have such great progress. As I know that you are going to return to your motherland,I formally invite you to attend the farewell party to be held for specific time is at 6 . on the ing you can take the at your hotel directly to the Sunny you get to the Sunny Club,please go directly to the Room 302,we will be waiting for you there. I am looking for forward to hearing from you. Yours Lihua 希望能帮上你！！！

When I was a little boy or girl,I dreamed to grow I think a child doesn't has freedam,and can't do anything now I have grow up,to my surprise,I feel more tired and have more I can do something myself,I don't feel happy at believe you also have the same thoughs with every us was a child ,we wanted to grow up,but when we became a older man,we don't have such nice life as whatever we are children or *** s,we should try to make our life better,and make ourselves more should try our best to study hard,then we can let parents have goog life,too!

I am Li Hua, in recent days, I saw some students in the class assignment does not work independently instead of copying others homework. I think this approach is wrong, in violation of students' daily behavior standard. But the reasons for this phenomenon is the teacher to stay the large amount of work, work difficult, copy homework students are not interested in homework, they just to plete the task, to please the teacher. Middle school students' to be honest, diligent, if we are learning problems or difficulties should consult the teacher.望采纳。

how tolearniell,i will you teaching me,i make great progress andit interests memore and believe that where there is a will,there is a is difficult for me tolearn English at high school it is really nothing like that in senior now and then i even want give as time goes by,its importance is shown here and start try my best to learn example,i read English words every morning,doing many consider it helpful to exchange learning skills with other give me some advice o

Dear Mr. Andrew, I wish to make a plaint about some English novels which I bought recently in your inter shopping shopping on the interoswa I'd like to pare the reputations of the shops, and check the messages left by the customers. After a long-time survey, I decide to shop in your shop because of your good reputation and service. Howeverc there is some damage on the cover of one novel. I am sure that you will agree that this is a most unsatisfactory situation. Therefore i request you to arrange to replace this book with another oneuycg which must be good. Otheise, i will have to ask for a refund in full of the price and left a bad apprase.尽力写了，希望能帮助你，不知道时间是否还来得急

“ My name is LiHua and I was born in February 1995,ChengDu ,SiChuan studied in GuangMing primary school from 2001 to I am studying at the Middle School in main courses are Chinese,maths,English,physics,chemistry,geography,history,politics,PE and so have many hobbies,such as swimming,palying basketball,PingPong, like listening to music and my favourite nusic is pop dream is to bee a doctor because many and many patients have fewer tained docors and very little I will bee a good doctor to help these people and let them live a happy you.”译文：我叫李华，出生于1995年2月，四川成都.从2001年到2007年我在光明小学就读.现在我正在成都第七中学学习.我们的主要课程有中文、数学、英语、物理、化学、地理、历史、政治、体育等等.我有很多爱好，比如游泳，打篮球，乒乓球，等等.我喜欢听音乐，我最喜欢的音乐是流行音乐.我的梦想是成为一名医生，因为有许多，许多的病人缺医少药.所以我要成为一个好医生来帮助这些人，让他们过上了幸福的生活.

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高考英语作文范文50篇李华

高中的孩子们在写给李华的一封信英语作文时，可以参考一些范文来写作。下面是我跟大家分享的给李华的信，欢迎大家来阅读学习~

给李华的一封信篇1

Dear Li Hua,

Glad to hear from you. How is everything going now? From your last letter, you said you were just home from a trip to Hawaii with your family. I am so happy for you to have such a great trip. From your description, I realize how a beautiful place Hawaii is. I hope I can travel there one day. I am a little stress now, because I am going to take my final exam for this term. I am confidence in English, Chinese and math, but I am afraid I can’t do well in chemistry. You know that I am always bad at chemistry. I am afraid I will screw the whole final exam. Oh, forget my trouble. Christmas day is ing. You must busy preparing for it. I wish you Merry Christmas in advance.

Yours,

Lee

亲爱的李华，

很高兴收到你的来信。一切都好吗?你上一封信中说你才刚跟你父母从夏威夷度假回来。我真的很开心你能有这个开心的一段旅途。从你跟我对夏威夷的描述来看，那真的是一个很美的地方。我希望有一天我也能到那里旅游。我最近有点点压力，因为我准备要考期末考试了。我对英语，语文还有数学很有信心，但是很担心化学。你知道的，我化学一直都不好。我很怕因为化学把这次期考给弄砸了。噢，别想我的烦恼了。圣诞节就要到了，你现在肯定是在忙着准备吧。提前祝你圣诞节快乐。

李

给李华的一封信篇2

Dear Li Ming,

How is everything doing nowadays, i havent seen your letters long time, and i miss you exceedingly. So our examination is over, mow i have a leisure time at home, and so busy doing everything .espicially today, lots of housework i need to do, but my homework havent finished, beside, i also should walk with my dog, water the flowers and do the shopping. Recently, my daddy bought me a puter, and in the everning, i need to the puter class for learning. with the knowledge, i have learned how to send a e-mail to friends already.

Your friend，

Wang Peng

给李华的一封信篇3

Dear Mr Wang,

I write to you telling you how we feel about your teaching in our class. All of us students think highly of your way of teaching, as you can always make your class lively and interesting. In addition, you are such a learned man that we can learn a lot from you and most important of all, you are patient with us. Frankly, you have built up our confidence in learning English well.

Some of us are still poor at English and need your help. We hope you will speak a little bit slowly so that we can understand you better. Besides, would you please spend more time with us, joining in our after-school activities so that we have more chances to practice our oral English?

I believe we can make great progress with your help.

Sincerely，

Li Hua

必备高考英语作文范文有李华写邮件、写通知、李华回信、回通知。

一、假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1、到达时间。

2、合适的礼物。

3、餐桌礼仪。

注意：

1、词数100左右。

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【范文】

Dear Terry,

How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend's home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.

To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you'd better bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What's more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food.

Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.

Best wishes!

Yours,Li Hua

二、你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：

1、短片内容：学校的发展。

2、放映时间、地点。

3、欢迎对短片提出意见。

注意：

1、词数100左右。

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【范文】

Notice

In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.

To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting.

What's more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.

The Student Union June

三、假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：

1、学校的体育场馆。

2、主要的运动项目。

3、你喜欢的项目。

注意：

1、词数100左右。

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【范文】

Dear Peter,

I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.

To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity.

As for me, I'm intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.

All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.

Yours,Li Hua

四、假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：

1、口语能力。

2、相关经验。

3、应聘目的。

注意：

1、词数80左右。

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【范文】

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.

I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What's more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.

I'm particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.

Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.

Yours faithfully,Li Hua

五、假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：

1、表示欢迎；

2、推荐他上哪所大学。

3、建议他做哪些准备工作。

注意：

1、词数不少于50。

2、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,Li Hua

Dear Tom,

I'd read the letter from you in which you asked me the security of our school. The security is attached importance in our school, there're some mesures to keep students from been as, we are educated by many awareness of safety. The security guards are increased and require all person e in the school to register, and so on. All of these mesures make our school more safety effectively.

Yours Sincerely,

Lihua

假如你是李华，刚刚收到两年前参观过你市的英国笔友Mike的来信询问近来公共交通状况，请你简要介绍武汉市 *** 采取的四条措施，并且从中选取一条或两条，结合自己的经历，写一篇短文，告诉Mike 你的感受和想法。

1.降低公汽票价2.推行免费自行车租赁3.修建4条地铁4.增加出租车数量 注意：1.字数120左右，所给的开头语不计在内 2.参考词汇：bike rental自行车租赁 Dear Mike, You asked me about the present situation of the public transportation in Wuhan in the last letter. _________________________________________ Yours,Li hua Now, I will municate the action of the government and my opinion with you. Firstly, the price of the bus has been cut down, which is very important, I think. Encouraging people to take bus can solve the biggest problem----too much people. Another way is to develop the bike rental. As we know, car is much bigger than the bike obviously. Driving a car takes up much more place than cycling. So, developing the bike rental is an absolutely correct way to prove traffic circumstances. Besides, government also builds 4 subway lines under the central of the city and increases the number of the taxis. In my opinion, all the action above is useful. When the actions above are all finished, the city will be more perfect.假设你是李华，你的美国老师Miss Man要求你们明天下午去听一个美国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。

请你根据以下要点，写一封短信向Miss Man请假。内容要点：*表示歉意*理由：去机场接人*询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座 写作要求：1：只能使用五个句子表达全部内容2：文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 Dear Miss Man,I am sorry that I can not join the cathedra about American history tomorrow afternoon because I have to pick up a friend from airport. It is the first time that my friend e to our city so I will go to airport to pick him up so that he will not lose his way. And I wonder if any record of the cathedra can be available so I can listen to it later .Hope my leave can be proved ,thank you Dear Sir/ Madam， 假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现在正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。

请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信。内容应包括：个人情况：年龄、性别、学历 个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况。

承诺：提供最佳服务 注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 生词：申请- apply (v.), application (n.) 志愿者-volunteer My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. I'm an eighteen-year-old boy studying in Yiwu High School. The reason why I want to be one of the volunteers is that I want to make the foreigners know more about my hometown as well as improving my own ability. I'm good at English, so there is no doubt that I can talk with them fluently. What's more, I like doing sports as well. Above all, I'm easy-going and kind-hearted. I will try my best to help foreigners no matter what trouble they have. I am sure I will be an excellent guide to show the people around our city and make them enjoy the attractions. Given a chance, I will offer them my best service. I hope that I can make a contribution to the Winter Asian Games. An early reply will be appreciated. Yours, Li Hua 最近我们学校就课外英语学习的途径做了调查。假如你是李华，请根据调查结果给编辑写一封信，结果如下：百人之十上网学习英语 百人之十不利用课外时间学习英语 百人之三十收看电视节目或电台的英语节目 百分制五十借阅英语图书 Dear Editor,We all know in this enty-first century, English is and has always been a very important language worldwide. Now, our country looks more into the popularization of English. Do fellows in our school care a lot about this subject? We took surveys of the different ways of learning English outside the classroom on students in our school, and found out that ten percent use inter, ten percent do not bother to study this in the time other than in class, thirty percent learn by watching television's or listening to radio's English programs, and fifty percent read English books. We are happy to conclude that students of our school are taking English more , Li Hua 假定你是李华，正在和家人在新西兰旅游。

请根据以下要点，给你的美国笔友珍妮（Jenny）写一封电子邮件告知你的旅游情况：1.美景：原始森林、海滩2.活动：观光飞机，极限跳伞3.朋友：新西兰人很友好，结识了一些朋友 注意：词数100左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 参考词汇：原始森林 primeval forests 观光飞机 scenic flights 极限跳伞 sky diving 高手帮忙，不要机翻，分数还会追加！Dear Jenny:its' so nice to write you again, for these several days, my parents and i 。

Dear Robert,

are you recently?Thanks for your letter,and for caring about our would like to tell you about grobal economic crisis has had great influence on our mother has been laid off and my father's salary has cut down since the crisis occured at the end of father tried many times to find a part-time job but failed .Now my parents are worried about my tuition of next a student,I can do nothing .I am very you think that I should get a part-time job?Could you give me some advice?

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

高一第6期英语报纸作文是吧Dear Harry,How did you spend your summer holidays?I'd like to share my last trip with my holiday ,I visited the West Lake in Hangzhou .Bright flowers,green trees,lovely birds and ancient towers attracted lots of tourists from all over the enjoy its beauty,many of them biked around the the evening,the lake was more beautiful in the took a happy walk and went to a wonderful music am sure that you will fall in love with this place when you visit it,and I am very glad to be your ,Li Hua.（纯手打，复制必究）。

Dear marry, After reading your letter,I know that you worry about your life here at school. Don't worry,'s mon that when you to a new country,you will be faced with a lot of challenges like language should say,our students here are really nice and can ask your teachers for help when you meet with love their students,even those from abroad. In my opinion,you should learn to be brave and try to municate with your clas *** closer you stay with them,the more they will understand confidence will grow as you get to know them,and you'll certain find that you have many friends. have a good time in China! Yours,Li Hua。

Hello, Lihua ! I have heard about your trouble with puters. You are so addicted to it that it has affected your study . I think you should take immediate and effective measures to get rid of it so now I would like to give you some suggestions. First ,you should join in some interest teams ,such as sport club ,music club and so on ,which can help you turn your attention to them . Second you should go travelling with your friends ,in which case the outer beautiful scenery will make you fet puters. Finally you should spend more time with your clas *** ates ,talking with them or playing with them. I hope these suggestions can help you. I am looking forward to your change.

Yours.

Linda.

You have made so big progress in Chinese！【And what really surprised me is your perfect handwriting.】 评价：正确的句子，含义略单调修改：You really improve a lot in your Grammar【完成时！】， sentence structures and language applying. I'm sure you will make bigger progress in future.评价：时态不对，内容可以修改：【新段】 【However】 Your letter【also】 has some mistakes.评价：转折连词在哪里！这很关键，段与段，句子与句子之间一定得有联系.内容不能显得太突兀.修改：You wrote some Chinese characters in a wrong way.评价：怪怪的修改：You made a few mistakes. Some Chinese characters you used is not think (practicing writing them and reading Chinese books)【reading and writing】 are good ways to correct writing errors.评价：总体还行，有点罗嗦修改：Also, there are some sentences which are hard to understand.评价：语态错！被动修改：be understoodListening to Chinese broadcasting, and watching Chinese movies【also】 can help you experience authentic Chinese life. As for grammar, there is also some (grammar) mistakes.评价：啊哈哈哈中文有语法？修改：Grammar of Chinese language is not that difficult.评价：我承认修改：I think you'll soon correct them after paying efforts. 评价：不要老用think ,suppose consider什么的都可以的.句子很好修改：【新段】 I am attaching an English travel note to this email. Looking forward to your reply.评价：乱错，时态&没完成题目要求的作文内容修改：An english travel note is attached behind the letter, and what I need is your precious ment.总评：首先题目要求内容必须完成.内容还可以充实，连接词加强，过渡加强.用词可以再好些.。